Thursday, October 14, 2010

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A bell on the cat
Because the station had a lot of food, there was a family mice in the station. Then another mice family came to the station. So, the storekeeper thought mice were too many. He brought a cat to station. Mice felt dangerous, and they made a meeting. President said, "It's easy to save the problem, we just out a bell on the cat, then we can know where is he." A mouse said, " Who do it?" All mice said, " Not me." Next day, all of mice ran away.
One day, While I was watching TV, my sister came here and told me she wanted to study Algebra 2 because she thought now she learned Algebra 1. it's easy for her. She know everything about this. I told her, " if you want to learn, I would teach you, but it was to hard for you." She said, "It's ok." I taught her, but she didn't know.

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1. I sat on my chair, and I thought what can I do because I did not know what I can do.2. I told with Sean about what can we do, and I thought he could clear the board because it near he.3. I closed my eyes and put my head on the table because yesterday I slept at 3:00 am.
4. Victoria felt happy. while she was dancing around because her danced like lady gaga.5. Victoria used pencil to hit me and Sean. Then she ran away because we looked tired.6. I listened two girls. They told about the dance because they were happy.7. When Mr. said, ‘ it’s time over .’ we stopped to see he.

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On Saturday I woke up at 11:50. I thought I should get up because I missed the breakfast , if I didn’t ate lunch, I didn’t know how I would feel. After lunch, I felt so tired because yesterday I slept not enough. when I got back to my room, I told my roommate I wanted to sleep, please don’t make noisy. I went to bed again. When I woke up, my roommate was not there. I looked the time, and it’s 5:33. I ate the second dinner. Then I felt good, because I thought I needed to sleep early. It’s good for me.

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1. The first car was moving, so we sat on the car.2. A family sat in the front of the house, and they said, ' Hi.'3. Every kid looked us, and they smiled to us.4. A group of middle schools students they wore green close, when we came they made music for musical instrument .5. A little girl said, 'Go TMP.' and her friend’s followed her, they said, "Go TMP."6. Two students threw the candies, and the kids pick up candies.7. A young man said, 'Give me candies.' we were so sorry no one brought candies here.8. An American person came here gave kids candies, and took with the driver.9. Students jumped out the car, and they walked for long time to the hays gym.10. The football players, they played on the football field.

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HomecomingLast week we had homecoming.After school, we came to school, and there had been a lot of car and parked on the school road. I found the first float car was moving, so we sat in our class car. At begining a USA family stood in front of the white house, and they said, " Hi." to us. Many American people looked us and smiled to us. I discoved a group of middle students wore green uniform when we came. They wave hand to us, and they made some music with musical instrument. At the traffic light, car was stopped. A younger man came here, and he took with my class car driver. He gave chocolate to little kids. There were lot of American people on the side of road. a cute little girl said, " Go TMP." and she friend followed her. On our car there were two American students they threw sweet candies. At the end, we jumped out car and walked together to playground . When we came to the gym, the football game was beginning.

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After Mr. ESL writing class, Mr. will give student a lot of ESL writing homework, and students need to use one hour to finish it, and put homework on the blogger Many students are from different countrys like China, Japan, Korea . Their can only speak a little English, so they don’t use English to talk to ask question in Mr. Class.Victoria had a English grammar problem. She didn’t know how to use "And", so she asked Mr. Mr side, " We can only use this word at middle, and we need to write comma before ' And ' "

100510 joe edit


At 6:00 am a song was ringing. Then I opened my eyes, and turned off the clock.I wore the school uniform and waited the school bus. On the way to school, I saw the sky, and it's cloudy .I got out the bus, opened the school door, put bag in my locker.Today we ate sandwich. I took double, and I felt full.After 7:50 am I went to ESL writing class. I sat on the chair waited the class began.

100710 joe edit


In TMP hight school, there has many teachers. They use different way to teach students. We think the bast kind of teacher is on hie class, we can learn important knowlage. We can use it in now , and it's very help for future. In his class, he can teach you how to study, and he can use many ways to make you save question. If this way is block, he can teach you other to know. Some don't teachers tall you how to study. They just give you homework to do. In some teachers classes, you just learn the easy thing. It's only little help in life. Some TMP teachers don't care what you do in their class. You can do anything. Many student like. This may it's not really good for students Acadenic. Then Mr. told us his goal. Mr. thought the native teachers don' know how to teach international students. He wants to teach the native ESL teachers, so now Mr. waits the green card. If he gets,he will leave TMP to a university .Learn: If you you have goal, you need to do it.Now I can not know my future. Maybe I will be a teacher, businessman or some others, but now I know I will study university in American, so now I need to learn my English quickly about to help me study harder. I think when I comit my future goal, I will study good and get good job in American.

100710 Yixin Edit

Today, my first class was ESL writing. My teacher was Mr. Nakagawa. He taught ESL class really well. We liked him very much. They were only four people in my class. However, I thought our class was very interesting. We wrote sentences and stories every day, but today, we only chatted in class. It made me amazed. We chatted together whole class. We talked about TMP, teachers, future, and green card. First, we talked about TMP teachers. In TMP, we had many teachers. Some teachers were good. If I asked them questions, they opened the book, looked at me, and helped me to understand. Then, we talked about our future. We talked about some university. Finally, we talked about green card. Mr. Nakagawa said he wanted to get an American green card because he wanted to help some teachers to teach ESL in university. I was very glad, but I felt a bit sad. If he gets a green card, he will leave here. He is a really good teacher. I want him to go on teaching us. I want to improve my English. This class was very unforgettable.

If we do something, we must work very hard.

I was good at handwriting. My teacher was really good. She taught so many people how to write handwriting. My grandmother also helped me. I liked handwriting very much. I wrote it every day. I put my paper on the table, sat down, picked up my brush, and wrote. I hope I can write better in the future.

100510 Yixin Edit

I opened my eyes, looked at the wall, turned off my alarm clock, and got up.

I left dorm, ran to the school bus, stepped in the school bus, and sat in the seat.

I got off the school bus, walked and talked with my friend, opened the TMP door, and came into it.

I went to the TMP dining room, pushed the dining room door, sat next to the my friend, chatted, and waited pray.

I went to my locker, took my book, walked to ESL classroom, moved the door, and came in it.

100410 Yixin Edit

1. In class, students were very noisy, so, Mr. walked in front of his table, opened his mouth, and said, “Today, I give you much homework.”

2. My class is very quiet every day, many students do their homework, and read books, doesn’t have a bit sound.

3. Victoria doesn’t listen clear, so, she looked at Mr., raised hand, opened her mouth, and asked teacher, Mr. told her, but she asked again.

093010 Yixin Edit

1. Yixin and her father took her math book, went out the TMP, walked, talked about TMP, arrived at her uncle’s home, and came into his white home after school.

2. Victoria sat down on her square chair, took her math book, opened it, and learnt hard last night.

3. Joe closed his eyes, put his arm on the small table, and slept on it.

4. Sean looked at Mr., opened his mouth, asked some question about H.W, and wrote down during S.H.

071010 Sean edit

I think my school TMP and I think my life
Today, my first class was ESL writing, we thought our life. Mr. said:” TMP teachers not every good.” I thought that was right. My ESL class teacher was so good, and he helped me when I study English. He was good teacher. My ESL listening class teacher was Ms. W. she could suggest me. My third class was Algebra II. Mr. Z was my math teacher. I liked math, but I thought Algebra was easy, and Mr. Z was too boring, so, I didn’t like Algebra II. My 4th class was PE. Ms .S was good teacher, and she taught me played football, volleyball, and English. So, I like PE class. My 6th was library science. My teacher was Ms. A. I thought she was good teacher because she taught I protect books, and she helped me to study English. My 7th class was intro to Art. My teacher was Ms. P, she didn’t teach how to draw the picture. This was my idea for all teachers.
Mr. said,” I want to have green card, so, I teach in TMP.” If he have green card, he will go to his hometown. I think if I finish my study, I am going to go to China. I want have green card. It is so good, but I miss my hometown, because my parent, my brother, my friends in China. I like my hometown.
According for this class, I learned about how to choose the class, and I can like my hometown.

051010 Sean edit

Morning
1. I work up in the morning.
I opened eyes, wore school T-shirts, and went to bathroom in the morning.
2. I took a bus
I was waiting the bus; I step in the bus, and sat chair.
3. I came to school.
I stepped dorm a bus, walked to school door, and opened door came to school.
4. I ate breakfast.
I went to dining room; I drink milk and ate egg.
5. I went to 1st class
I went to locker; opened door took a book, and walked to ESL class.

Afternoon
1. I went to dining room to eat lunch.
2. I went to bathroom.
3. I walked to Nation hall.
4. I opened my computer.
5. I went to bed slept
Night
1. I was eating dinner.
2. I went to my room and played computer.
3. I went to dining room for study hall
4. I went to take a shower.
5. I was sleeping

051010 Sean edit

Morning
1. I work up in the morning.
I opened eyes, wore school T-shirts, and went to bathroom in the morning.
2. I took a bus
I was waiting the bus; I step in the bus, and sat chair.
3. I came to school.
I stepped dorm a bus, walked to school door, and opened door came to school.
4. I ate breakfast.
I went to dining room; I drink milk and ate egg.
5. I went to 1st class
I went to locker; opened door took a book, and walked to ESL class.

Afternoon
1. I went to dining room to eat lunch.
2. I went to bathroom.
3. I walked to Nation hall.
4. I opened my computer.
5. I went to bed slept
Night
1. I was eating dinner.
2. I went to my room and played computer.
3. I went to dining room for study hall
4. I went to take a shower.
5. I was sleeping

041010 Sean edit

Mr. walked to front of my desk, he took my writing paper, and he said, “You will come back to the dorm and finish homework.”
I read ESL book in 112 rooms, and I had not make sound.
Victoria said,” I don’t know how to do homework.” And Mr. gave Victoria homework, and helped she can finished the homework.

092910Yixin Edit

One day, we had a homecoming. Many high school students were sitting on the big car, and they threw sweet cherry candies for American elementary school students. A young American boy and a young American girl put their foot on the main street, and they picked up the Milky Way chocolate in front of a red car. When I arrived at Main Street, many beautiful TMP girls were dancing in front of a small store. I saw many cute cards on store’s door and some beautiful flowers in front of the door. Then, Mr. Nakagawa was standing at the small clothes store. Next, between a young tall woman and an old thin woman, Mrs. Pahls was playing small football with her third son. After that, I saw a brown hair man in front of the Hays bank, and he took beautiful pictures with us. A kind woman put her body on the brown horse, and she rode the horse on the grass. When I arrived at Hays gum, TMP football club students played the football game. Many TMP students and teachers were sitting on the seat, and they watched the football game. However, I looked some TMP students sat on the square chair, and they were listening to the pop music. Before, I never take part in these activities. On that day, I had an unforgettable experience.

300910 Sean edit

1. Sean stood up; walked to teacher’s side and asked Mr. Nakagawa about ESL writing home, work during yesterday night study hall.
2. Victoria opened her room door, went to living room, and sat chair put book and studied math last night.
3. Joe sat his class chair closed his eyes, and put down his head, and he slept on the table.
4. Yixin and her father walked to home, she said” I like TMP School, because TMP is very good.” They looked view.

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Parade
I saw many old senior students at my school, and they sat class float. I looked homecoming’s King and Queen at school, and they stood in car. They went to float, and they threw the cadies for young children. I viewed many old cars at my school, and car stopped and parked on the road. I sight old man and a young man at TMP playground. They rode the brown hors. Many cute kids at home door, and they picked up sweet candies. There were only Alan and I walking to Nation’s dorm, and many American people at roadside looked my class float. I watched my TMP football players at football playground. They played football game and voted in homecoming dance’s King and Queen at the football play ground during the half time show.

270910 Sean edit

1. I saw many old students at my school, and they sat in float.
2. I saw homecoming’s King and Queen at school, and they sit in car.
3. I saw many old cars at my school, and car stopped in front of TMP.
4. I saw homecoming’s King and Queen at float, and they threw sweet candies.
5. I saw old man and young man at TMP playground, and they rode a horse.
6. I saw kids in front of home door, and they picked up candies.
7. Only Alan and I walked to Nation’s hall.
8. I saw many people at roadside and looked my class float.
9. I saw TMP football players at football field, and they played football game.
10. I saw result of homecoming dance’s King and Queen in football field during the half times show.

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1. I saw a high school student on the big car, and she threw some sweet candy for children.

2. I saw a young boy and a young girl on the main street, and they picked up the sweet candy in front of a red car.

3. I saw many beautiful girls on the main street, and they danced in front of the Hays library.

4. I saw Mr. Nakagawa at the small clothes store, and he stood behind the square door.

5. I saw Mrs. Pahls between a young woman and an old woman, and she played small a football with her son.

6. I saw a young man in front of the Hays bank, and he took some beautiful pictures with us.

7. I saw a kind woman on the brown horse, and she rode the horse in the grass.

8. I saw many boys in the Hays gym, and they played football game together.

9. I saw many people on the floor, and they watched the football game.

10. I saw many high school students sitting on the square chair, and they listened to the music.

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1. I was sitting on the chair,and stop making everything. I want to sleep because I was so tired.
2. I picked up my pen, spun, and put it up on the desk because I was so bored.
3. I didn’t spell” clean”, so, I asked Joe” How to spell clean?” “C-l-e-a-n,” Joe said.
4. I was sitting in the study chair. I felt very boring, and looked Victoria walking to her chair sit down because Victoria noisy.
5. I looked whiteboard, picked up eraser, and cleaned whiteboard because whiteboard near me.
6. I was daydreaming. I thought about next class because I have 30 sec.
7. I looked bell, and I listened Mr. called me because 5 minutes over

200910 Sean edit

My weekend
I had a happy weekend. Saturday, I was sleeping and woke up at 1:00pm. I went to bathroom. Mandy and Mary came to boy’s dorm. Mandy and I played computer in living room at 2:30pm. We went to Lomato’s to eat dinner. We went to boy’s dorm and watched movie in living room. Mandy and Mary went to girl’s dorm at 11:30pm. I went to my room and played computer games. On Sunday, in the morning, I slept and woke up at 2:30pm next day. I went to girl’s dorm because Mandy wanted to go to the mall. However, her VISA card was in my room. At night I studied English and slept. It was my weekend.

092110 Yixin Edit

I go to my uncle’s home, and I eat lunch every week. However, this week he invited a new friend. On Saturday, I went to his home. First, she gave me her Chinese book, looked at me, and read a story in Chinese. Then, she put some her favorite book on the sofa, and we read together. We watched cartoon together. I thought the cartoon was very interesting. His daughter liked cartoons very much. Next, she was a math teacher in For Hays State University. She has two big eyes and long curly hair, and she looked so beautiful. She always smiles, and she helped us to clean the table. Finally, we ate Chinese food together. She said Chinese food is very delicious, and she liked it very much. She wanted to learn Chinese food. We were very happy. When we finished eating, I came back to my room.

150910 Sean edit

So many mice live in store. Because a lot food is in the store, mice like living there. Storefront didn’t like mice, so storefront brought cat. Then, mouse’s president had a meeting, and said, “We should put a bell on cat.” Everybody said, “It is very good idea.” However, one of mice said, “Who goes to paste bell on cat?” Then, everybody left the store because everybody they can not put a bell on cat.

“a kick in one’s gallop”
I imagine I can learn English well good, but I played computer game every day, and I didn’t study very hard. So, it is “a kick in one’s gallop.” Because you have dream. If you don’t work hard, you won’t have your dream come true.

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1. I stood up and picked up Mr. Nakagawa’s eraser in this morning because his eraser is on the floor.

2. I walked and ran very slowly in the ESL classroom on the Friday morning.

3. I put Mr. Nakagawa’s eraser on his desk in front of a book and came back to my square chair the day before yesterday.

4. I stood on the floor and talked with Victoria beside her desk in the ESL class.

5. I sat on the student’s chair and took out my favorite pencil in my pencil case.

6. I played with my favorite pencil and used it to hit Joe’s head the day before yesterday because he stepped on my foot.

7. Mr. Nakagawa talked with us, and I looked at him in the ESL classroom on Friday.

100710 Victoria


We talked about a lot of things with Mr. Nakagawa. First we wonder about TMP teachers. Half teachers are not hard teaching, and half teachers are really hard teaching. I think ‘not hard teaching teacher’ is so lazy or they forgot them original resolution. Sadly, in TMP has so many that kinds of teachers. Another topic is we talked about Mr. Nakagawa’s goal. He want teach in college, about ‘How to teach ESL. He wants to teach to American, but he needs green card. So, he is waiting to green card. he said, “When I make a plan, everyday I think after two years.” I thought it’s really good idea. So, in the future, if I make a plan, I will be thinking about it. Today I got a really good lesson. Today I thought about my goal. I think I got a really good time
(Do not forget to original resolution)
&(Do not forget to my goal)
As mention earlier, today I got a really good lesson. First “Do not forget to original resolution” I think if all people don’t forget to original resolution, I think they can do them goal. So, I will try to don’t forget it, and do not forget to my goal. I think if I have a goal, I can keep my original resolution. I am international student. I have a purpose to USA so, I came to USA. I paid a lot of money, I must success to my goal. I really hope so. So, I am going to hard work!!!

100510 Victoria

1. The alarm clock rang at 6:00am. So, I opened the eyes, and yarned.
2. I ran to the TMP school bus. I found seat, and sit down on the chair beside the Mary.
3. I arrived to school, went to my locker, and I saw mirror in the first floor restroom.
4. I waited for breakfast, and I prayed for GOD. I enjoyed the bread, and cereal.
5. I held ESL class door, walked to my seat, and put my blue binder.

100410 Victoria

-Victoria sat down on the in front of the desk chair, and put the math book on the her square wood desk. She held her pink pencil, and learned about mapping.
-Last night Joe didn't go to bed early because of his ESL homework. So, today morning he held his head in ESL class, finally he slept on the desk.
-Sean was wondering about homework so, he turned his body, opened the mouth, and asks Mr. Nakagawa about his English grammar. So, Mr. Nakagawa looked at him, and explain about it.
-The bell rang in the school. So Yixin and her father walked to the dorm, punched the in front of the dorm bell, opened the door, and went to the inside.

093010 Victoria

-Victoria sat down on the in front of the desk chair, and put the math book on the her square wood desk. She held her pink pencil, and learned about mapping.
-Last night Joe didn't go to bed early because of his ESL homework. So, today morning he held his head in ESL class, finally he slept on the desk.
-Sean was wondering about homework so, he turned his body, opened the mouth, and asks Mr. Nakagawa about his English grammar. So, Mr. Nakagawa looked at him, and explain about it.
-The bell rang in the school. So Yixin and her father walked to the dorm, punched the in front of the dorm bell, opened the door, and went to the inside.

092910 Victoria

One day one tall white American student was in front of the TMP, and he looked at me. I also saw him. Eric shin threw the cherry candy for young American children in front of the white house. Two college students were in front of the white house. They picked up the cherry stick candy during parade. One cute girl said to me, 'Hello!' as she was drinking coke. Then Mr. Nakagawa at men's clothing store. He was taking picture the parade. I looked at him. I think he saw me, and then blonde hair baby were in front of the FOX Theater. The baby was sleeping. It looked like angel, so, it made me smile. The red jelly was on the floor in front of the flower store. Eric shin ran to there and picked up it. I saw many people in the food stores. They waved hands to us, and one white hair ma'am was in pizza store in front of the nation's hall. She was eating beef pizza

092710 Victoria

1. I saw one student. He was wearing TMP blue shirt. I don’t know his name, but I saw him in front of the TMP, and he saw me.
2. I saw the Eric shin. He threw the cherry candy for people, and the people stood up in front of the big white house.
3. I saw children in front of the white house, and they picked up the cherry stick candy.
4. I saw cute girl. She said, “Hello!” to me during she was drinking coke.
5. I saw Mr. Nakagawa at men clothing store, and he bought his new pants.
6. I saw baby in front of the FOX Theater, and the baby was sleeping.
7. I saw red jelly on the floor in front of the flower store, and Eric shin ran to get it.
8. I saw many people in the clothing stores and food stores. They waved hands to us.
9. I saw one girl was in pizza store in front of the nation’s hall, and she was eating big beef pizza.
10. I saw young couple in front of the football stadium, and they were hugging.

092110 Victoria

Last Saturday I watched movie with my friend. We ate popcorn, and drank coke during watching the movie. The movie name is ‘Resident evil’. It was not really fun. Anyway, it was 3D. After I watched movie, we were waiting for RA. RA had to pick us up, but during we were waiting RA, It was really cold outside. So, we waited in Movie Theater. I was bored in movie theater, so I paid the money for little ball, and I got it. I played with my friend by this ball. Girl’s dorm RA didn’t come on time. So, I went back to dorm with boy’s dorm RA. I went to dorm. It was really cold. I don’t know why the weather suddenly change into cold, but it was fine because I had a really good time, with my friend~

091910 Victoria

1. In ESL class I stood up, and than walked 5 steps on the floor because I was tired at that time, and Meng was seeing me.
2. I kicked the infront of desk chair by my legs, and I spun it infront of the Mr. Nakagawa because I was bored.
3. When I saw Meng, I laughed with my big voice, and I was so happy because I shouted.
4. I jumped to my square seat, and hit Joe’s head by my violet color pencil. When I looked Joe, Joe looks so tired
5. I ran around the student chair and shook my body because I wanted to dance, in ESL class
6. I sat down my seat, and then I opened the pencil case by my hand. because I have to picked up my pencil
7. After I opened the pencil case, I picked up my pencil. I put the pencil on the desk, and then slept in the ESL class.

091510 Victoria

Mice live in store. This store had so many kind of junk food. So, mice like this store, but storekeeper really hated mouse. So he bought cat. This cat likes to eat mouse. So, mouse was afraid. They had a meeting. Mouse had a question to president. Mouse asked, “What can we do?” So president said,” Let’s paste bell on cat.” So mouse said,” Yes! It’s good idea. You’re nice!!!” They were happy, but one young mouse said,” Who is going to do?” they was afraid. Finally they were run away. So, all mouse left the store.


*Anybody has emergency they are all run away*


Before I went to travel with my family, we stay in hotel. We had a good time in hot spring. We finished play, and then we went to eat dinner at in front of the hotel restaurant. My mom and dad didn’t finish the dinner. So, my sister and I went to the hotel, while I was opening the door. My sister wanted to make fun of me. So when I opened the door, she said,” Who…Who are you!!!” for empty room I was afraid. So, I run away with shout. I kept going, and finally, I sprained my legs I didn’t have fun in travel.

091510 Yixin End

A bell on the cat

The store has too many mice. The store has a lot of food. So, many mice came to the store. However, the storekeeper was not happy. He wanted to ask cat for help. The cat came to the store. So, all mice had a meeting. A mouse asked, "How can we do?” Storekeeper said, "We should put a bell on the cat." A mouse said, "Who?" The next day, all mice went away.

You can ask somebody for help

One day, I did my math homework. I had a difficult question. I didn't know how to answer. I thought long time, but I still didn't know. So, I walked to CiCi’s room, pushed her room’s door, opened my mouth, and asked her. She looked at me, put my book on the table, picked up her pencil, and taught me. I understood and wrote it on the paper. I told her, "Thank you!

Sunday, October 10, 2010

111010 Sean

I think my school TMP and I think my life
Today, my first class, we thought our life. Mr. said:” TMP teachers not ever good.” I thought that is right. My ESL class teacher is so good, and he can help me study English. He is good teacher. My ESL listen class teacher is Ms. W. she can suggest me. My third class is Algebra II. Mr. Z is my math teacher. I like math, but I think Algebra is so easy, and Mr. Z is so boring, so I don’t like Algebra II. My 4th class is PE. Ms .S is good teacher and can teach me play football, volleyball, and English. So I like PE class. My 6th is library science. My teacher is Ms. A. I think she is good teacher because she teaches I protect books, and she helps me study English. My 7th class is intro to Art. My teacher is Ms. P, she didn’t teach how to draw the picture. This is my idea for all teachers.
Mr. said,” I want to have green card, so I teach in TMP.” if he have green card, he will go to his hometown. I think if I finish my study, I am going to go to China. I want have green card. It is so good, but I miss my hometown, and China had my parent, my brother, my friends, and everything. I like my hometown.
According for this class, I learned about how to choose the class, and I can like my hometown.