Tuesday, February 9, 2010

HoDong Choi

HoDong Choi
ESL Trans English
February 9, 2010

Encourage teenager to drink alcohol

R1. Watching TV
Ex. 1) Beer of the advertisement always looks very delicious. Drinking people look very delighted. Whenever I see the beer advertisement, I suddenly want to drink the beer even though I don’t like alcohol.
Ex. 2) When I was watching a movie at my home, I sometimes wish to drink alcohol. It’s because the famous actor or actress drank a wine in the movie. They acted that they were drinking very delicious beer, so I wanted to drink some beer.

R2. No checking ID
Ex. 1) Some of my friends knew some bar where teenager could without ID. They sometimes let me know where the bar is even if I didn’t ask. But, whenever they told me, I wanted to go there actually.
Ex. 2) One of my friends can make a fake ID. He said that he can make a fake ID for me. I thought if I have the fake ID, I would go to drink every day and ruin my life. I had been afraid of it, so I cannot but refusing it although I actually wanted to get it.

R3. High school activities
Ex.1 ) My friend, Seok Ho, invited me to go to drink some Soju which is famous in Korea together. At that time, I stated feeling curious about alcohol, so I came along with them. Going to the bar, I felt thrilled.
Ex. 2 ) When a big school festivals were done, every guys decided to go to drink some beer. It was hard to quit because everybody decided to go there. Also, I wanted to get along with them, so I went there together.

Dean

2-9-2010

Dean

My country encourage young people to drink
R1: Party
Ex1: When I was a high school student, I got a birthday party for me. First, my friend called me from outside and they said we ready to something for you. So, I went to there to meet my friend and then I was surprised. Because they told me today was special day so you should drink beer and vodka. Finally, I couldn’t go to my home that day.

Ex2:My first drink experience was when I graduated middle school. It was so amazing. We drank in our middle school at 2:00AM. Actually, I didn’t want to drink but my friends said to me It was our last day and we should make a recollection. So, I unavoidable to drink that.
R2: Parents
EX1:When I was almost 10 years old, my father has company meeting. So, We should go to there. I was so thirsty that I was trying to find something to drink. Then I saw like grape juice and I drank that but taste was strange. I felt like hot and then I was realized that was wine no grape juice!

EX2:We meet our every family every months. We usually met in restaurant and ate together. Sometimes my uncle gave beer to me, If I didn’t get that maybe they thought I was nut. So, I drunk that.
R3: Feeling lost
EX1: Former days, I had a girl friend. My parents didn’t want a girl friend just want study from me. So, I hid my girl friend to my parents but they knew that. Even though she was a very nice girl, they didn’t care. After that, my parents called my girl friend and we were broken. Finally, I was so angry that my parents activity. As I wanted to escape from that I drank.

EX2: I had many friends in Korea and of course I had gotten best friend too. One day I fought with him and I wanted to apologize him but it was so hard tome. Therefore I made good place and called him. After that, he came to there then we were drinking each other after that I told him I was sorry.