310810 joe

Hi Mr. I will give the SD card the interent alwys broken。

31 0810 Sean

My teacher, My class, My TMP

My teacher is Mr.Nakagawa. He is super cool. He is a very good teacher. I like my teacher. Because he was have bovine and funny teacher. I like ESL writing2 class. Because ESL is very interesting class and ESL class can hope me study my English. TMP is my school now. I'm very like my school. Because TMP have my friends, TMP is very good school, he is very interesting and he have Mr.Nakagawa teacher. Because I like TMP

08/31/10 Yixin

My Teacher, My Class, My TMP

My teacher is Nakagawa. He is very interesting. We like him very much. Because he teach our writing and the class is very fun.

My class is really good. It makes me very happy. In this class, I can improve my English and ability. I wish I can use English do everything. Because I think it's very useful. I like this class.

My TMP is really good. I can make many friends here. I can learn many things. I can change my bad habits. I love there.

083110 Victoria

My teacher, My class, My TMP

My teacher is MR. Nakagawa His class is very good, because I think my English skill is more more improof because of this class. so i'm glad to that reason ! and I love TMP. actually tmp is friendly not yet but If i know them they are all good people. and this TMP campus background is sooooo beutiful and air is clean I like here and I like them and I like My teacher!

083110 joe

My Teacher, My Class, My TMP
My teacher is Mr. Nakagawa. He is super cool teacher and I love he so much. His class is very very interesting, because on class we chat each other and told about anything. I like it.
I like Algebra 2. Because I had learn in China . So study this class I think it’s easy for me. And I can do better about homework.
I like the TMP. We can choose class. Do what I like do. I like this. It’s good for me.

083010 victoria

The turtle and the ducks

I think the turtle is so stupid. Because he forgot how to he flew in the sky and then talked to queen... this story gave to me a good precept. Example, kind of do not absence of mind or suit to discretion. The story is so funny but at the same time turtle is poor I don’t want to live look like turtle life, but I think something try is good chance for us.

083010 joe

The Trutle And The Ducks

Today we learn a fable. the story tould about a trutle want to fly to see many new things. then two ducks come and said they can help he. the trutle was very happy. then two ducka hold the stick ues mouths and the trutle also use the mouth to hold the stick. then they flew an the sky. some people sew the trutle the sky. and they tould anther people . when people looked sky fould the trutle and said where was the trutle. when the trutle opened the mouth and said here, he was fell down and died.
the story tould us when you got the successful don't pretension .

30 08 10 Sean

The Turtle and the Ducks

Turtle want fly. Because he think he see only the ground and the grass and he want fly go to air see many things. He want can fly with he to Africa or to America. Then two ducks with a stick, the stick, a turtle biting and brought him to air. But he puff his mouth. The end he died. I think Laziness, it won’t lead farther than to where we are sitting right now. There is so much to learn, there is so much to be done. I firmly believe that most of the simple and poor people in this world who become successful, are those who work hard and those who are not ashamed working with their hands.

08/30/10 Yixin

The Turtle and the Ducks
I like this story very much. This story talk about the turtle was not very happy. He wants to see the new things and fly in the sky. Two ducks help him fly with stick. She tells him she can hold the stick in his mouths and you must hold on with his mouth. When he flies in the sky, he saw many new things. Some people on the ground looked up. When the queen asked the turtle, he opened his mouth and fell to the ground. He died.

August 29th (victoria)

(My goal)

Get out of ESL class Because if I go to the university it is not good for me

Good at writing skill because now l am not good at writing skill

Use a English so good because I live in here I need it

Most good at English in class Because I want best

Don’t sleep in class Because it look not good

290810 Yixin

1. I want to get A in writing class.
Because I go to USA,I want to improve my English.
So, I must do homework every day.

2. I want to make my English good.
Because I like English and I think it's very useful.
So, I need listen to English every day.

3. I can go to the wonderful university.
Because I like America university.
So, I must learn English every day.
4. I can talk with everybody in English.
Because I wish my English really good.
So, I need talk English with my friend every day.
5. I can use English do everything.
Because I think English is very useful.
So, I want to go to ESL every day.

08/26/10 YiXin

My name is Meng Yixin. Now I haven’t English name. But I will choose one. I am 15 years old. I think I am warm-hearted. I have two big eyes. My hobbies are listening to the music and reading books. I am good at handwriting. My favorite subject is Art. I have a young sister and brother. My sister is very cute and she is 6 years old. She has two big eyes. My brother is 18 years old and he is warm-hearted. I like this school very much because I can make many friends.

I miss my family I am first got to USA. I am good at handwriting, when I was Great 1 she has learn handwriting. I like my roommate because she likes her. I have a phone bought yesterday. I got to USA to improve English. I choose TMP because my father’s friendly in Hays. Now I haven’t weekend job she need go to teacher’s home to study. I like blue when she looks this color first time I think her fall in love with this color. I want to go to university in USA she think it’s her plan.

1. I want to get A in writing class. Because I go to USA, I want to improve my English. So, I must do homework every day.

2. I want to make my English good. Because I like English and I think it's very useful. So, I need listen to English every day.

3. I can go to the wonderful university. Because I like America university. So, I must learn English every day.

4. I can talk with everybody in English. Because I wish my English really good. So, I need talk English with my friend every day.

5. I can use English do everything. Because I think English is very useful. So, I want to go to ESL every day.

082610 Joe

My name is Yisong Zou. I decided go to the USA just five months ago. Because my friend wanted to improve his English in USA, so I want to follow him. Now in USA I learn many things in school and life. I need to change some Chinese habits. Like you need do everything on time In weekend I like sleeping and watching TV because it makes me feel relaxed. Some time I will go to mall to eat Chinese food with my friends. I like study in USA you can chose you interest class and set with you best friends. Every night I will on qq chat with family and my friends. Now I need study hard and improve my English because I can’t understand teachers speak.
GOAL
1. I want finish everyday’s homework. Because I think homework can improve my writing. so everyday I will do writing homework first.
2. I want improve my writing. Because I have many mistake in writing. So use office 2007 to help me.
3. Don’t sleeping in class. Because sometimes I would sleeping late yesterday, so if I feel tired will drink coffee.
4. I want to be friendly with my classmates. Because I like have many friendly in USA. Do I will try chatted with classmates every day?
5. When I finish this class I want get B。Because I want to improve my English. So I will study hard.

082610 Sean

Sean

26 08 10

ESL writing2

I’m Victoria's classmate. My name is Sean. I‘m from China. I’m 16 years old. I have girl friend. I date girlfriend only one week but I love her. I like America because My girlfriend is in American. My favorite subject is math because it is easy. My favorite food is egg roll and my favorite color is red. My favorite is play basketball and play computer games. I has a one younger brother, his 10 years old.

My Goal in TMP ESLWRT class

Goal 1:I can not have ESl WRT class. Becanse I want my English is very good. So I think I can everyday study ESL.

Goal 2:I want have ESL WRT TIST A. Because if I have ESL WRT tist A. I can study English class. So I can everyday writing.

Goal 3: I can writing every English writ. Because I want writing English writ is very good. So I want everyday writing English wirit.

Goal 4: I can study every class. Because I like stuad math. So I tiy to talk study class mates everyday.

Goal 5: I want stuady ESL WRT go to best University. Becaus I go to best University is very good. So I want everyday study English.

0826 2010 Victoria

My name is Victoria I’m sean’s class mate I’m from Korea and I’m 16 years old. I have a boy friend in Korea I miss him I like all food .and My favorite singer is pushcat dalls And I don’t like library science class because it is so bored-_- and I hate bugs and I really loves shopping ~

(My goal)
Get out of ESL class Because if I go to the university it is not good for me
Good at writing skill because now l am not good at writing skill
Use a English so good because I live in here I need it
Most good at English in class Because I want best
Don’t sleep in class Because it look not good

Pictures of Writing 2 Students

25 08 10 Sean

My classmate
My classmate is Victorie
She from Korea
She is 15 years old
She have boyfriend in Korea
She like eat every food
Her favorite singer is Bigbang
She don't like library science class because class is very boring

August 25th 2010 Victoria

My classmate (Sean)

He has a girl friend He date girlfriend only one week but he loves her . he likes

America because his girl friend is in America

and his favorite subject is math because it is easy His favorite food is egg roll

and his favorite color is red he said he has a one younger brother

250810 Yixin

My classmate
His name is Joe. He is 18 years old. His hobbies are sleeping and watching TV because he wants to be relaxed. His favorite subject is physics because he thinks it is fun. His favorite color is black. He went to hays with his friend. He has a sister. She is very cute. He likes TMP-M very much because he makes many friends here.

My name is Yisong Zou. I went to the USA just five months ago. Because my friend wants to improve his English, so I want to follow him. I learn many things in school and life. I need to change some Chinese habits. I like sleeping and watching TV because it makes me feel relaxed.

250810 joe

My classmate
1 She misses her family she is first got to USA.
2 She has a boyfriend in China .
3 She is good at handwriting, when she was Great 1 she has learn handwriting.
4 She likes her roommate because she likes her..
5 She has a phone bought yesterday
6 She got to USA to improve English
7 She chose TMP because her father’s friendly in Hays.
8 now she hasn’t weekend job she need go to teacher’s home to study.
9 she likes blue when she looks this colour first time she think her fall in love with this colour.
10she wants got to university in USA she think it’s her plan.
My name is Meng Li Xin. Now I haven’t English name. But I will chose one. I am 15 years old .my hobbies are listen to the music and read massages. I have a young sister and brother. My sister is very cute and she is 6 years old. She has two big eyes. My brother is 8 years old and he is warm-hearted . I like this school very much because I can make many friends

230810 j0e

Weekend
At weekend Saturday afternoon,dale and me went to the girl’s dormitory studury US hirstury . Because I can not read notbook understand by myself .
At 2:00 we got the girl’s door ,Tingting tought me how to learn US hirstury . First we need know the important world about the hirstury .And then we need learn the note . At last we did histury bomework .Before dinner we leaved the giel’s dormitury
We got boy’s dormitory at 5:30 and we are the nice chinese food.
Who went toshe girl's dorm?
Dale and I go to the girl's dorm.
where is the chinese restaurant?
It's in down town.
when you went to boy's dorm?
Wen went to dorm at 5:30.
what did you do at moning?
We were slipping.
why you ate chinese food at dinner?
I don't know the cook dicided.

23 08 10 Sean

My Weekend
Sean
23/08/10
ESL writing
Last weekend, Alan ,Yao and I went to girl’s dorm and went to watching movie. We were very happened last weekend. In the morning I wake up so late. Noon Yao, Alan and me went to girl’s dormitory. Because I must went to make the egg-fried rice the friend of mine to eat. I thought I did very delicious. Because my girlfriend, Alan, Yao and Mary tell me it’s delicious. I was very happened. In the afternoon, we did homework in girl’s dorm living room., And watched TV. In the night we were going to watch movie, and we were going to shopping. This weekend we had fun in girl’s dorm,

August 23th 2010 Victoria

August 23th 2010

Victoria

I was watching TV (Just CF) alone on sunday in dorm because I was so bored.

And then I was tired so I was go to sleep.

And when it time was study hall I was sit chair and memorize English world.

And then called to my friend . It was finish I was go to bed

What are you doing last weekend?

I was watching TV

When are you watching TV?

At Sunday afternoon i was watching TV

Where are you watching TV?

In girl's dorm

Why are you watching TV?

Because i was so bored

Who did you watching TV?

Anybody. Just alone.....

081910 joe

My hometown

My hometown is called YuYao city in ZheJiang province.I like this city.

YuYao near the sea. So wo can eat a lot of seafood.I like this food very much .And there's person was very friendly.If you have some trouble.People will come and give you a hand.

At summer lots of come to my hometown Because waxberry will be ingathered at this time.If you teast it ,first you will little acid and the all sweet.I think everybody like itAnd we call this fruit is YangMei.

Now my hometown has many change.It was very different in my childhood .It's changing better.

Now I'm in USA .It's far from China .I miss my parents . I miss my friend.And my best chinese food

I'm miss my hometown.I like my home town.

081910 Sean

I'm self introduction

8/18/10

ESL writing2

Sean

My name is last name: Shen first name: Hong English name is Sean. I’m 16 years old. I'm from Yu Yao Zhejiang China. My birthday is 20-May-1994. My habit is play basketball and is play computer very much. I have young brother. Her is 10 years old. My parent is businessman. They have a company. They company is make fireplace. So I want become businessman or lower. Can help my parent? That is me and my family. I like pop music. I like action movie. I like NBA TV. I like Chinese girls. I like USA live. That is exciting.

081910 Sean

myself

Hello, my name is Sean. I am from China. I am 16 years old.

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