ethan chen

OCT
ESL WRITING 2
Ethan Chen

improvement

There are 2 improvements that I have made since I came here and study in ESL class First. My grammar is improved. Before my grammar is very bed. I don't know how to make a sense sentence. For example. I didn't know when I needed to add the period of the and. But MrTaught us when used the one subject and two verbs we needen't to add the comma. If we needed to use two subjects and two verbs we needed to add the comma in front of the and. That could let me made the sense sentence. Second, I improve my writing. Before my graph always just a little and didn't have . Now I know how to make it clearly and more. When we wrote we should write the nice topic sentence first because this could make the reader know what I wrote and could make them were attractived. So they wanted to read it. we also needed to wrote the first, second until you conclusion because this can let readers know how about the story keep going. Finally in my conclusion. When we do something for a long time and we study more and more. Then we can get better and better.