DIAO

Sep 13

Writing 2

DIAO

How to write journal

Using examples and opinions are easy ways to get good grades for your journal. I have an average of 98 for my ESL Writing 2 class because I always write good examples and opinions in my journals. For example, according to the sentence, “I have madness.” I would write this sentence like “I have much madness, for example, I have to double check my room when I left my room, even I know I did not forget anything.” this will make the sentence more detailed, and example an makes my journal more clear for teacher. Also opinions are very important to the journals. For example, I want to change my madness quickly because I feel so bad. This opinion tells teacher my feelings. For me examples and opinions are the best part of the journal. I hope every student in ESL Writing 2 can write very good examples and opinions.