DIAO

Nov 30

Writing 2

DIAO

It was great experience at ski resort, and I had 3 specific fun moments in this ski trip. First, it is my first time to snowboard. For example, I went to snow board at Thursday morning after breakfast. I did not know how to do it using snow board. I did not take lesson because I thought it might be very boring. The truth is that I was rolling down from the top of the mountain to the bottom, but it turned out better the second time. At least I did not fall down. I tried to jump during the time I went down because I saw other people who used snowboard jump from one place. After I tried ten times, I gave up since my body hurt very much. I felt I was dying when I fell down again. After I fell down many times I knew how to snowboard. In my opinion this is one of my best memories in this ski trip. Second, I ate a lot of Japanese food. For example, there are two Japanese restaurants around our condo. I ate a bowl of udon noodles in one of the restaurants. The sushi in the other restaurants was very delicious. It was made by rice and some fish when I ate them; I also ate some wasabi with them. In my opinion, the Japanese food is the best food that I had eaten during this ski trip. Third, I bought a lot of cheep stuffs in ski trip. For example, I bought six T-shirt in American Eagle and it only cost me thirty dollars. In the mall, every shop had a discount of at least 25%. It made me very exciting. I also bought a pretty bag for my mother. The bag was brown with many “G” letters covering the bag. I told my mother after I bought the bag and she was very happy. In my opinion, making my mother happy also makes me happy. So I was very happy in our mall trip during this ski trip.

Ho Dong Choi

Ho Dong Choi
ESL Writing 2
November 30, 2009

My ski trip

It was great experience at ski resort, and I had 3 specific fun moments in this ski trip. First, it is that I played snowboard with Jay and Alex. For example, it was my first time to play it, so they taught me how I can play it well. Fortunately, I could learn it fast, so I started to raise speed earlier than other people. Even though I felt several times, it was very exciting to play snowboard fast. In my opinion, playing snowboard at “Black diamond”, which is so steep, would be a good experience in whole of my life. Second, I went to shopping at third day with Jay, Cedric, Edward, and Steve. For example, it was during “Black Friday sale dates”, so I could buy clothes and shoes at a discount. To be specific, I bought “Polo Ralph Lauren’s” shoes, which originally cost 129 dollars, at 65 dollars and “Tommy Hilfiger’s” jeans, which originally costs 70 dollars, at 34 dollars. Buying these well-known goods at discount as much as 50% is almost impossible, so I was really happy. In my opinion, “Black Friday sale dates” are the best days for people, liking shopping very much. Third, it is that Jay, Edward, Alex, and I ate delicious noodles and chicken soup, cooked by ourselves. For example, we bought carrots, broccolis, and some piece of chicken, and we boiled them after cutting. They were very tasty, especially the chicken soup, cooked by Cedric. In my opinion, cooked by ourselves, the chicken soup is much better than TMP lunch.

ethan chen NOV 30

NOV 30
ESL WRITING 2
Ethan Chen

Ski trip

First, it is my first time rent ski stuffs. For example, We needed to rent ski stuffs like, ski boots, ski, and ski poles. Dan gave us each person a white paper when we arrived the ski shop. Then we needed to gave the solder the paper because I got the shop so I didn't know what I needed to do. I waited a long long time. Finally I couldn't wait any more so I went to ask the solder and they told me need a white paper. Then I knew and got the ski stuffs. In my opinion, if you don't know what you can do then you must need to ask. Ask is a good way to solve problem.
Second, it is my skiing. For example, today we went to the skiing so we needed to wear the ski coat, pants and boot. But the wear the ski boots is very difficult to walk because I didn't know so I was so tired when we arrived the mountain. Got a little break then we wear the ski. I fell down after I wear the ski that was so slip and I couldn't get balance. I tried my best stand and walked very slowly. If we wanted to ski we needed to take tram got the top of the mountain and skied down. we took the tram but the tram was so dangerous because the tram didn't have railings, and we must skied down a little distance because the destination had a little slope. We couldn't walk down must skied down. But I didn't know so I fell down again. All the skiing road was all a slope so if you standed you couldn't control youself and skied down. Before I ready to ski I had already fell down many times. I shout ,"GOD", I got I got the bottom of the mountain in the end. That was a very different experience for me. In my opinion, first time is always difficult but if we can spent time final we can success.
Third, it is my first time cook in the hotel. For example. We wanted to cook in the hotel because it is very interesting and that was very special experience. So I and my roommate went to mall bought many stuffs like beef, meat, vegetables and so on after skiing. We put all the stuffs in the fridge then we opened the Roast machine and began to cook. We ready to cook the chicken so we wash the chicken. Then we put the water into the bowl and put the bowl on the Roast machine. We put the chicken legs into the bowl when the the water boiling. After few minutes we took out the chicken legs then we put the water and chicken legs into another bowl. After that we also put salt, hot paper, sesame oil and put the pot covet on it. We cook about 30 minutes and we couldn't wait any more because everyone wanted to taste it so we took out the cover. We taste it that was so delicious, and everyone wanted one more after they ate the leg. In my opinion. Playing everything with friends that is more interesting than play by oneself.

Alex Eun NOV.30

Alex Eun
11.30.09
ESL writing

My ski trip

It was great experience at skit resort, and I and three specific run moments in this ski trip. First, it is that I went to peak 8 tracks. For example, I played snowboarding with Edward, Bruce, Paul, and Jay. We went to peak 8 tracks. I was really exciting peak 8 tracks because this track can go down fast. Also, I often practiced jump skills. So, I need many jumping tracks. This track has many jumping tracks. Finally, this track has long way so I can excited a lot. In my opinion, I really enjoy this track because this track has everything I want such as jumping tracks, long way, and steep slope. Second, it is that I went to restaurant. For example, last night ski trip, my roommates and I went to restaurant. This restaurant is specialty shrimp store. I ordered including shrimp, crab, shellfish, and crawfish. I waited about twenty minutes, my food appeared. This food is really delicious so I can’t forget tasty. In my opinion, if I will go Colorado next year, I will go that restaurant again. Then, I will eat same menu. Third, it is that I went to Colorado shopping mall. For example, I went inside the mall with my Korean people. We were very hungry. So, we went to food corner and ordered Chinese food. Then, we went to PACSUN store and look around a store. I wanted to buy gray pants, but I didn’t. Later, we went to shoes store. I wanted to buy basketball shoes but I can’t because I don’t have enough money. Finally, we went to VANS shop. I found my own style shoes. In addition, the prize is so cheap. So, I bought shoes in VANS shop. I really like my shoes until now. In my opinion, I want to go Colorado shopping mall again because there are many things I want such as basketball shoes, pants, and coats.

Wang

Nov 30

My ski trip

It was great experience at Ski resort, and I had 3 specific fun moment in this ski trip. First, it is I saw many people play crazy snowboard playing in this trip. For example, before I went to ski trip, I only can saw they played crazy snowboard action playing on TV. They can do many actions when they played. Anyone has seen it on TV, and it was not special for us. When I really saw people flying and do many actions, speed up and turned many circles, I can feel that was very difficult and dangerous. If they don’t have much practice, they cannot do that. Before I went to ski trip, I just feel excited about it. In my opinion, people do many actions when they ski. It’s so difficult and dangerous. It made me know everything is difficult if you want to make them very well. Second, it is I can use snowboard very well after I fell down a half day. For example, it was a really short, and I felt excited about it. When I know the easy way to use snowboard. I thought the ski trip is really too short because I was already loved it and enjoyed it. First day afternoon, I went to the third top of mountain with Aaron. I can play not bed at that time, and I can follow Aaron. Sometimes I just wait for Aaron. In my opinion, if you can play it better by every time, you will get more and more confidence and you will enjoy this sport. Third, it is I went to a very difficult slope to play snowboard. For example, that was the really hard place; many people went there just stop and chose the easy way. I went with Eddie and Chad, Eddie is a kind of good at snowboard but Chad always fell down and cannot play very well. When we went there, we just went to the hardest way and Eddie told us we were going to die. Finally, I followed with Eddie and finish many times; also I fell down many times. But Chad always made us waiting for him. In my opinion, if we want improve our skill, we have to choose the difficult way to practice.

Chad

Chad Gong

30th Nov

 

It was great experience at ski resort, and i had 3 specific fun moments in this ski trip. First, it is the first I stayed in house we lived there. This room is big enough for 8 people, and I felt comfortable in this room. After we came back from super market, we relaxed ourselves in this room. Wang and me played WWE together. The rock music played by laptop let this room lively. At the dinner time, we cooked noodle for ourselves. The house became more and more warm, and everyone in this room felt so happy. And then we ate together and kidding each other for fun. I loved the moments when i stayed in this house so much because it let me felt at home. Second, it is went out to watch the beautiful scenery. At the second night, we fed up with the noodle we cooked, so we decided ate outside. It's my first time came to here so I interested in everything in this town.  The design of the house is fantastic, it makes this town more beautiful. I kept play snow near the road because I have never seem so much snow in my hometown, even it's too cold and made me can't feel my hands. Because of beautiful scenery I felt everything goes to better. In my opinion, The view of that town was really nice and let me want to stay here longer. I enjoyed this town so much and have fun all the time. The last moment was snowboarding. The reason I went to peak 8 is not I asked for it but Wang lied to me, he told me Peak 8 is flat and easy to snowboarding. Actually the slop there was really big and the height was really high. It's too late when I noticed it. I have no choice and have to snowboarding to the bottom. I even can't keep balance at that slope. Finally, I arrive

d bottom but the way I went down was not snowboarding but use my butt to fall down. I still enjoy that though I always fall down and hurt myself so much. 

Jiawen 11/22

Jiawen,Zhou
2009\22\11
There are 2 reasons that I come to the America. The first reason is I can improve my English. For example, when I came here, I had to speak English everyday. That made my spoken abilities improved. When I took the classes, I discussed with the other students in English. Last time, I went to the mall and bought a pair of shoes. Nobody went with me, so I talked with the assistant that I wanted to buy shoes which size are 6 half. This was my first time to buy shoes in America by myself, and I got improve by this time. I knew how to talk with assistant. The second reason is I can learn about American culture. For example, I joined dance party with Americans. When I was in china, I never join this party. In this party I found out that American’s are very open. I enjoyed Halloween in here. In my school, most of people wore special clothes in Halloween. In the mall, when I went to a shop, they gave me a candy. That made me more in-depth understand Halloween. In my conclusion, I came to the America, my English improved, and I in-depth understand America culture.

Ho Dong Choi 11/22 *10

Ho Dong Choi
ESL Writing 2
November 22, 2009

The ski trip

Waiting for the ski trip, I have prepared 2 things for the ski trip. First, I bought delicious foods and sweet beverages. For example, I bought 12 packs of instant noodles, and one box of pop, named “Milkis”. I’ll hold a party during ski trip to have a good time with my ski trip roommates, Jay, Alex, and Edward. Second of all, I made a promise to borrow a pair of waterproofing ski gloves and a dark thick parka from Aaron. So, I can save money as much as about 200 dollars. In my conclusion, I can have a really interesting vacation with the food, drink, and the ski clothes.

ethan chen NOV 22

NOV 22
ESL WRITING 2
Ethan Chen

English only in dinning room

On Thursday, our dinner was China Garden ,and all boys and girls came boy's dorm ate dinner so we had many people. we chattted with each used our own language so the dinner dinning room was very noisy because many different languages with together. Suddenly RA told us this was the dinning room everyone needed to speak English but nobody cared about what her said. On Friday, we were called went to dan's office because spoke the chinese in dinning room and we got job on sunday afternoon. On sunday, we went to the school carried the desks, chairs and move the stuffs into the study hall for an hour. In my conclusion, we needed to practice speaking English because we paid the money for it, and RA warned us because they cared about us and hoped us don't waste money.

Chad 22th Nov 11/22 *10

Chad Gong

22th Nov

I was so happy that weekend is coming again at Friday, and I thought I could enjoy this weekend. But unfortunately, my laptop was broken because of my careless at Saturday. When I finished movie and left my desk, I tied to wires of laptop, and it drop off from the desk. Picking it up, I realized my laptop was damaged. It resets by itself all the time when I tried to turn on it. Maybe there’s something wrong with my disk. I didn’t know what I can do at that time. It’s very boring in dorm, especially without laptop. It means no Under Worlds, no GTA and no chatting with William, so I started to walk around the entire dorm. After half an hour, I tried to fall asleep at 9 o'clock but it didn’t work, so I went downstairs and watched Wang playing Star Wars. I even didn’t want go back to my room. At Sunday, I slept until 2:00 PM, and I hope the time could go fast. In my concluding, everyone should know how to fix the laptop, or you will be bored by you life in dorm.

DIAO Nov 23 *10

Nov 23
Writing 2
DIAO
This weekend is terrible weekend. I am campused, so I cannot go anywhere or use my computer. I cannot go to marion hall to date whit my girlfriend, Vinvian. I almost sleep all of weekend. For example, I slept at 8 pm on Friday and woke up at 3 pm. On Saturday I slept at 11 pm and woke up at 2 pm on sunday. After I woke up I have to go to school to help them move eleven tables, some deer and some boxes for thanks giving because I spoke Chinese during Thursday dinner. After dorm meeting Den told me that I cannot use my computer during this ski trip. It made me very awfulness. In my opinion this weekend makes me very said, and I want go to ski trip quickly.

Alex Eun NOV.22 *10

Alex Eun
11.22.09
ESL writing

Ski trip

All TMP resident students will go Colorado for ski trip. We will leave nations hall at six. Before we arrive in Colorado, we will go WALMART because we need to buy food such as spam, meat, rice, orange juice and coke. We are going to a hotel, and we will check rooms. Then, we put down packages our room. Next, we will go rental house, and we should rent skiing and snowboarding equipment. We need to see Dan, and we should take a ticket. Then, we can play skiing or snowboarding a day. Finally, four days later, we must clean a room such as wash dirty dishes including food, throw trashes, use a wet towel and clean a floor. Then, we need to take our skiing or snowboarding equipment, and we prepare to go to nations hall. In my conclusion, I am interested in ski trip, and I want to enjoy snowboarding everyday.

Wang

Nov 22

Friday is my birthday！

Alex Eun NOV.19

Alex Eun
11.19.09
ESL writing

2. My boss has a nice house.
a. There is a large garden behind his house.
b. The house is four hundred meters squares.
c. Three people’s job is clean this house.
d. This house spends his fifteen thousand dollars.

3. Carl is a bad driver.
a. She always drives 150 miles per hour.
b. She always drinks beer when she drives.
c. She catches a handle only one hand.
d. She doesn’t care about a red light.

4. The inside of the taxicab was dirty.
a. There are many people sit on the taxicab.
b. They clean a taxicab once a week.
c. Some pets pee on the taxicab.
d. Some people who is really sick sitting on the taxicab.

5. The student cafeteria was noisy and crowded
a. More than hundred students talk each other.
b. If I dropped a cup, many people laughed at me.
c. In cafeteria, it has many tables for hundred students.
d. All TMP students go to cafeteria in same time.

Ho Dong Choi 11/19 *10

Ho Dong Choi
ESL Wiring 2
November 19, 2009

Practice 2

2. My boss has a nice house.
a. His house has a big garden, planted a lot of rosebushes.
b. His house has DVD room with diverse movies, so he can watch a movie when he wants.
c. His house has a warm and aromatic spa, so he can take a bath, relieving stress.
d. His house is located nearby seashore, so he can oversee the nice blue see and beautiful sky.

3. Carl is a bad driver.
a. He drives his car as fast as 165km/h on the general road.
b. He does not care about signal lamp.
c. He smokes in the car even though there are his parents in his car.
d. He listens to the music in loud volume that everybody can listen to it.

4. The inside of the taxicab was dirty.
a. There are 7 cans and torn magazine on the floor.
b. There is a sickening smell like from carcass.
c. Nobody can look well through the glass of the texicab.
d. The trunk is full of residue of snack

5. The student cafeteria was noisy and crowded.
a. There are 72 students, talking to each other.
b. 3 teachers are directing disordered students with loud voices.
c. Alex dropped his tray and cup by mistake.
d. The students are laughing at Alex, making a mistake.

ethan chen NOV19

NOV 19
ESL WRIGINT 2
Ethan Chen

My boss has a nice house.
A. His house look like a park
B. His house is value about 100 billion dollars.
C. His house has a colourful wallpaper
D. His house has the four floors and each floor has a living room.
Carl is bad drive.
A. Every time he drives police always warn him.
B. He broken his wheel.
C. He drove his car hit the tree.
D. After drinking beer, he drove the car.
The inside of the taxicab was dirty.
A.there are many trash in the taxicab.
B. The taxicab smell so bad.
C. the drive never clean the taxicab.
D. There is all mud around the taxicab.
The student cafeteria was noisy and crowded.
A. About 60 students went to the cafeteria at the same time.
B. All students were talking.
C. Someone droped the cup then everyone began to shout.
D. Waiting the long time, some students taught each other began to play.

DIAO Nov 19 *10

Nov 19
Writing 2
DIAO
My boss has a nice house.
The house has a big garden in front of it.
There is a big swimming pool behind the house.
The house is 320 meter squire.
The house spent his 50 millions.


Carl is a bad driver.
She always drives like 130miles in the downtown.
She plays with who sit behind her when she is driving.
She almost falls asleep when she is driving.
She is drunk when she is driving.


The inside of the taxicab was dirty.
I can see some black gum on the seats.
I can see the stub on the seats.
I can see the snacks on the seats..
There are some people who were spit in the taxicab.


The student cafeteria was noisy and crowded.
The cafeteria is only 60meter squire.
There are more than 100students in the cafeteria.
There are 6tables just for teachers.
The students always talk with their friends at lunchtime.

Chad 19th Nov *10

1>
1. That house has a very big garden.
2. The glass on the windows is cleaning and shinying.
3. The design of this house is fantastic.
4. This house has 3 floors and enough room.

2>
1.His hands always shaking when he touchs the steering wheel.
2.He never care about traffic lights.
3.He doesn't know how to brake.
4.He always drives wrong way.

3>
1.The leather of the seat is almost break off.
2.The seat belt doesn't work anymore.
3.There's much gum stick on seat.
4.Dust bestrew all over the carpet of taxi.
4>
1. Students talk to each other all the time.
2. The workers in cafeteria passed the food slowly.
3. The cafeteria is small but there're about 100 students at lunch time.
4 Some guys stand out of the line and make the aisles crowded.

Jiawen

Jiawen,Zhou
2009/11/19

1. My boss has a nice house.
a. My boss’s house is near by the sea.
b. My boss’s house including a swim pool.
c. My boss’s has 2 living rooms and 5 bedrooms.
d. You can see whole city view in my boss’s house.

2. Carl is bad driver.
a. He drives 100 km need use to 3 hours.
b. He always passes the red light.
c. He always has to stop the car by the police
d. He always has crash with other cars.

3. The inside of the taxicab was dirty.
a. The drink on the taxicab’s sits.
b. You can’t see outside clear from taxi’s windows.
c. There have cake, beef and milk on the corner of the taxi.
d. The trash smell is strong in the taxi.

4. The student cafeteria was noisy and crowded.
a. Students talk loudly in the cafeteria.
b. The music in the cafeteria is noisy.
c. In the cafeteria just has 10 tables for 200 students.
d. Have 200 students eat lunch in a 100m2 cafeteria.

Wang 11/19 *9

Nov 19

My Boss has a nice house.

a. My boss has a house with a beautiful garden and a swimming pool that looks like a palace build in the mountain.

b. When I saw my boss' house, I wonder the one like his.

c. there are many places like spa, mall, and KTV near my boss' house.

Carl is a bad driver.

a. Carl did 5 traffic accidents before.

b. Carl don't care about the driving advises from anybody.

d. Carl is a careless driver because she doesn't have driver license.

The inside of the taxicab was dirty.

a. Many trash like cans and spoil fruits in the taxicab.

b. The driver has never cleaned the inside of the taxicab before so I can see there's no space that I can seat.

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d. The driver of the taxicab smokes cigarettes 1 pack a day so that there's so many trash pack in the taxicab.

The student cafeteria was noisy and crowded.

a. I cannot move my feet in the student cafeteria.

b. I have to speak 2 times loudly when I talking with my friends.

c. I am always pushed by many students because people at lunch time wants to get food quickly.

d. The student cafeteria always make me crazy because some american students stole my food when I was not pay attention about my food.

Ho Dong Choi 11/18 *10

Ho Dong Choi
ESL Writing 2
November 18, 2009

The clothes room of a Fashionista

The clothes room of a fashionista has many closets, and it is organized really well to find faster what they want to wear. For example, the big closets are full of a lot of T-shirts and pants. There are “Calvin Klein” Jean, “Adidas” T-shirts, and “Levi’s” jeans in those closets. Next to them, there is a small and transparent drawer, having many kinds of watches, such as watches for sports and well-known watches like Nike’s watches. Additionally, there are many hats in the long drawer at the corner. Similarly the hats, in the drawer, are diverse and organized quite well. There are many stylish hats, such as long black beanie, red shiny cap, and hip-hop styled cap. In my conclusion, you should make your clothes room organized and clean first to be a fashionista.

Jiawen

Jiawen Zhou
Nov. 19th.

To take a crowded bus on a hot day is really uncomfortable. For example, on a hot day, the temperature in the bus is really high. People are who in the bus really high will sweat, so it makes the smell on the bus really bad. Because the seats are limited, some of people cannot sit down. They have to hold the handrails, so people who stand on the bus are tired. When the bus crowded, the people crowded together, so many of people’s sweat will rub off on other people’s clothes. On the bus, the air is not fresh. In conclusion, on a hot day a crowded bus is terrible for people to take, because nobody wants to take a bus with too many people and get sweat from other people on them.

DIAO NOV18 11/18 *10

Nov 18
Writing 2
DIAO
Our student cafeteria is on the first floor. It is a very crowded and noisy place at lunchtime. During the lunch time many students and teachers come to first floor to eat lunch. Students always keep talking at that time. There are more than 100 students eat lunch in this small cafeteria. I have to go there early to find a good seat to sit with my friends together every day. All of students in cafeteria like to talk about their interesting topic with their classmates. For example, they always talk about a game that control a small person to jump every to get some beans. After the small person gets the beans the door will open then they can go to next section. They all talk how to jump that can get the beans quick and not be caught. So, in my opinion, more than 100 students keep talking in this small cafeteria is not a good feeling.

Alex Eun

Alex Eun
11.18.09
ESL writing

Describing a Place

I want to describe about student cafeteria at lunchtime in TMP. Before I go to cafeteria, I can see that many TMP students go fast because they want to eat food early. When I get in cafeteria, I can see many wooden desks and dark blue chairs. Also, many TMP students get into line in a row. You can find many trays, silver spoons and forks in cafeteria. Then, you can see people who wearing a cooker hat. In addition, a cafeteria is really noisy because many TMP students talk their friend each other. There are many posters hang in cafeteria, and we can know much news about school from the posters. Finally, the floor is very dry in cafeteria because if the floor gets wet, we will fall down. In my conclusion, I think we have a nice cafeteria in our school, and it makes me want to eat more food.

ethan chen NOV18

NOV 18
ESL WRITING 2
Ethan Chen

My neighbourhood

There is a most beaufitul house in my neighbourhood. At the house first floor, there are office, meeting room and so on. Every room has a landscape painting. At the second floor, there is a very big living room. Above the living room is a empty place because there have a beautiful chandelier. There is a big TV in the middle on the wall, and two acoustics on the each side. The big sheep blanket in front of the TV, and you can sit and sleep because the blanket is very comfortable. There also have many nice sofas in the living room. At the third floor are their bedrooms. Their bedroom have a big restroom . In the restroom, there also have a shower bath that just can stand take shower. their bedrooms also have many nice lights and look very beautiful. In my conclusion, this is the most beautiful house in my neighbourhood.

Chad 18th Nov *10

Chad Gong

18th Nov

A crowded bus on a hot day

Because there’s large population in China, most of the public are full of the people such as on the bus. There’re so many people on the bus especially when people go to and go off work. Sometimes even it does not at that time still have this phenomenon. One day on my summer vacation, I wanted to go-off for my lunch but it’s too hot to ride a bike. I went down-stairs and wanted to get on a bus. When the first bus arrived at bus station, I was surprised for so many passengers. So I decided wait for the next bus because of crowed. However to my disappointment, the next bus was still full of people, so I have no choice have to get on the bus. That bus did not have air-conditioned and so many passengers, it was really hot. I even didn’t have enough room to stand along, the people on the bus crowed together. At that time, the sun was very hot, and I even feel I can’t breath. Finally, I get out off the bus at the front station before my destination because I can’t abide that situation. In my conclusion, never take bus in China especially in summer. That’s not only a bus but also like the dessert.

Wang 11/18 *10

Nov 18

My neighborhood

My neighborhood is Aaron Yu and Hodong. Their room is a kind of organized room. The first thing you will see in their room is the Xbox and the TV because other room don't have it, and it is the Xbox in the dorm. Aaron and Hodong's desks looks very organized, and I know they clearn their desks everyday. Their closers are very formal, Aaron's closer have many clothes because he always shopping online. Even he has so many clothes, he also can find the clothes easily. Hodong's closer almost like Aaron's. Another special things in their room are the weights. Aaron bought a barbell and a dumbbell. They put them on the floor, and looks very organized. In my conclusion, my neighborhood's room is a very nice room, and I always go to their room because their room is the one room that can make me comfortable in the boy's dorm.

10/10

Jiawen

I would like to describe a section of my ESL classroom. In my big, bright ESL classroom, Mr. Nakagawa’s work station is on a corner. The desks are really messy, but there are not dirty. The right angle is made up by three wood, long, big desks. On the first desk, there have grammar, writing, and Japanese books. The books are heap up together. Next to the books, there have a black, hollowing, metal pen case and a snowman coffee cup. Mr. puts his marks and any kinds of pen in coffee cup. The coffee cup and pen case are all on the corner of the table. Mr. always works on the second desk, so this part of Mr.’s work station is emptier than other tables. There have a gray, big computer on the middle of the desk. Next to the computer, there have two Mr.’s wife beautiful photos. In the front of this desk, there have a black, comfortable chair. The third desk is the messiest desk. There have some plastic baskets. Some textbooks about ESL grammar, writing is in the plastic baskets. Near the third desk, there have a small, short, brown table. On this table, Mr. put his awards. In my conclusion, Mr.’s work station is big, clean, and messy. The stuff on the Mr.’s desks is unorganized.

Alex Eun

Alex Eun
11.17.09
ESL writing

Section in ESL class

I will describe Mr.Nakagawa’s work place. First, Mr.Nakagawa’s desk is really messy. He has many English grammar books and papers. He has his pictures of his wife from when he lived in Japan, and pictures beside his computer. Also, there are many textbooks put into the baskets on the desk. He puts a lot of pens, highlighters, and markers in coffee cups. He hangs Mimi’s blue and white frame and afro-hair. Finally, he has an orange and gray radio. I want to give advice on how to clean his desk. First, you need to organize items by type, to do this start by putting everything on the ground. Then, start putting groups of things back onto sections of the desk. In my conclusion, Mr.Nakagawa’s desk is really messy, I think he needs to follow my advice.

ethan chen nov 17

NOV 17
ESL WRITING 2
Ethan Chen

Mr's section place

I will describe 1section in ESL class. this place is the Mr. Nakagawa's section place. Mr is a ESL teacher in black suits. He has a longer table, and there are many ESL grammar books and papers put with together. Beside the table, there is a black, comfortable chair. There is a wooden messy desk in front of the Mr's white blackboard, and Mr wrote some Japanese words on it. In the classroom. There is a post named Bei Jing opera with red and green papers in front of the book case. In my conclusion, Mr's section place is messy and I think Mr needs to organized it.

Chad 11/17 *10

Chad Gong

17th Nov

I’d like to describe a section in ESL classroom where’s Mr.’s work zone. Our ESL teacher is Japanese always in blue suit. There’s a black comfortable chair on the middle and the desks are surround his work zone. Because of so many documents and books, these desks seem kind of messy. Also, there’re many marks in a cup disorganized. Many diplomas are on the other sides of his desks. Above his work zone is a place show students’ learning outcomes and some souvenirs. Many colorful T-shirts are on the wall disorder, and Mimi’s blue and white silk screen frame is also in that area. Some newspapers about ESL class are near the T-shirts

DIAO 11/17 *10

Nov 17
Writing 2
DIAO
Mr. Nakagawa’s room is very messy. Mr. Nakagawa is an ESL teacher in blue suits. He comes from Japan. I said his room is messy. For example, there is an unused white old computer in his room, but he keeps that computer in his room. Another unused stuff is a broken white light. He did not through it away and kept in his messy room. There are some bookshelves with many useless dictionaries. Behind the bookshelves, there is a big white board with many Japanese words. The place that Mr. Nakagawa always sits is a corner. There are three wooden desks at the corner. There are so many papers with some grammar questions and some colorful markers on the desks. In my opinion, this is why I said Mr. Nakagawa’s room is very messy

Ho Dong Choi 11/17 *10

Ho Dong Choi
ESL Writing 2
November 17, 2009

Describing ESL class

I’ll describe 1 section, Mr.’s desk in the corner of the class. ESL teacher in dark stripped shirt sit down on the comfortable chair, surrounded by desk. On the desk, there are many English books about writing skills and grammar, organized. Next to the chair, there is a long black heater, so he can be warm whenever he feels cold. Above the desk, there are Mimi’s blue and white silk screen frame and colorful messy T-shirts on the white wall, so we can know that he made several cool T-shirts before. Also, the news paper, next to the T-shirts, makes me to know that Mr.’s hair has been long since before.

Wang 11/17 *10

Nov 17

The ESL classroom is a very colorful room. When you first time come to our ESL classroom, you can see all ESL students' faces pictures near the wall, and the picture looks very nice. One of the next thing that you will see is Mimi's blue and white silk screen frame. Mimi was go back to japan, and that is the memory about her in our class. You can also see the wooden desk in front of the Mr.'s white board. There are many pens and books on that desk. The bookshelves with many useless dictionaries is in the right side in our classroom, and there is a post named Beijing Opera in the back of the bookshelves. There is a big white board with many japanese words in the back of our classroom. That board looks very colorful because of many japanese words. In my conclusion, many different things in our classroom make our classroom very beautiful.

Chad 11/16 *10

Chad Gong

16th Nov

My roommate Leonard is a difficult person in dorm. He always use my laptop without ask me. When I left my room even for a while, he would use my laptop and changed the song on laptop. I hate anyone who use my laptop without ask me so much especially change something such as songs, movies. One day, I hang out with my friends, and his juice was spilling out of the cup and fall on my laptop when he was using my laptop. After that, he didn’t clean my laptop. The juice fall on my laptop is dried when I came back to dorm; it was really hard to wipe out. My keyboard and screen was so sticky. Cleaning it, I spent almost 1hours. In addition, if I was watching movie along, he’s so annoy when he went into the room, he appraised all the time and talked about this movie’s roles. He drives me crazy.

Advices

I’m sorry to hear that. I give you some advices. If you do not want him to use your laptop with out ask you, you can make a password or you can say: “Please ask me before you use my laptop.” I f you roommate didn’t follow you rule, you should hide your laptop. When you watch movie, you can told him be quiet and don’t disturb you. Finally, you do not ant use your room with you roommate, you can ask Dan and told him change your room.

Response

Thanks for you advices, I think some of these are doable such as makeing password and telling him to ask me before use my laptop, I’ll try it. But hide the laptop is hard to do that, its complex and how can I hide it in front of my roommate. I also will adopt tell my roommate be quiet when I’m watching. But the last one is unworkable because Dan won’t let us change the room easily. Thank you for your all the advices.

Chad

Chad Gong

16th Nov

My roommate Leonard is a difficult person in dorm. He always use my laptop without ask me. When I left my room even for a while, he would use my laptop and changed the song on laptop. I hate anyone who use my laptop without ask me so much especially change something such as songs, movies. One day, I hang out with my friends, and his juice was spilling out of the cup and fall on my laptop when he was using my laptop. After that, he didn’t clean my laptop. The juice fall on my laptop is dried when I came back to dorm; it was really hard to wipe out. My keyboard and screen was so stick. Cleaning it, I spent almost 1hours. In addition, if I was watching movie along, he’s so annoy when he went into the room, he appraised all the time and talked about this movie’s roles. He drives me crazy.

Advices

I’m sorry to hear that. I give you some advices. If you do not want him to use your laptop with out ask you, you can make a password or you can say: “Please ask me before you use my laptop.” I f you roommate didn’t follow you rule, you should hide your laptop. When you watch movie, you can told him be quiet and don’t disturb you. Finally, you do not ant use your room with you roommate, you can ask Dan and told him change your room.

Response

Thanks for you advices, I think some of these are doable such as make password and tell him ask me before use my laptop, I’ll try it. But hide the laptop is hard to do that, its complex and how can I hide it in front of my roommate. I also will adopt tell my roommate be quiet when I’m watching. But the last one is unworkable because Dan won’t let us change the room easily. Thank you for your all the advices.

Ho Dong 11/16 *10

Ho Dong Choi
ESL Writing 2
November 16, 2009

Difficult person

My classmate, Diao is difficult person in the cafeteria of the dorm. For example, he eats smelling delicious and looking good noodle in the cafeteria at the night whenever I feel hungry so much. The hardship is that I bear hungry at every night to prevent fat, so I feel painful whenever I saw him eating noodle. Even though he doesn’t intend that, he sometimes gives me hardship.

The Advices

For example, you can talk to him that you don’t want to see the noodle. You can ask him to eat noodle in his room. You can eat some eggs at night because eggs can’t make you fat. You can go to other’s room when he eat noodle. You can get your staff form cafeteria before he goes there. You can break the hotpot, so he can’t cook noodle.

My response

Thank you for telling me the advices. I agree to talk to him that I don’t want to see the noodle. Also, I think eating some eggs is better than bearing hungry. Going to other’s room could be one of the ways. If I put my staffs in the cafeteria, I’ll bring them before he goes there. After I do all steps you recommended, I’ll break his hotpot if I feel hard.

Jiawen

My dorm mate Yang yang is a different person in the dorm. When she is in the school, she looks clean. However, I think she is a dirty girl in the dorm. She always comes to my room to play computer and to do my homework. She putted pens, notebooks, computers in my room. Her stuff covered my desk. It was too messy. She love eating food, and leave the trash in my room, it makes my room smell really bad. However, most of times, she takes shower two days a time. I always ask her to take a shower. On weekends, I can’t even stand her. She didn’t even brush her teeth, dress up, and made hair. She looks too weak and dirty. I asked her why, but she didn’t even change. She didn’t do anything in her room. She said that Marie would argue with her. I really hope one day she can change. I don’t want to clean and organized my room for her every day. She makes my room messy, it makes me really uncomfortable.

Ethan’s advice:
You can chat with her and tell her what you think. You can also tell her if she takes many things on the table and make your table messy. You can tell her to clean it, because that is your table. I know you will feel empress, but you can tell her very kind. I think she will know you.

To Ethan:
Thanks you for your advice. However, I tried to talk with her last time. Even she said she knew she would clean it, she wait more and more minutes, she didn’t clean it. Few days past, she made my room messy again. I think she didn’t care and put inside to remember, because we are good friends. I think I need to find a useful way to solve this problem. I don’t want to talk to her again. I believe one day, someday will talk to her, and she will change it.

Alex Eun

Alex Eun

11.16.09

ESL writing

Describing a Place

My roommate, Lucas is a very difficult person, in the dorm. My roommate doesn’t take a shower everyday. He just washes his face and brushes his teeth before he went to school. I think he only took a shower on weekend. Also, my room smells bad because of him. So, I often buy incesents because when some Korean students come to my room, they leave early. In addition, he is always playing games or watching cartoons. I never see that he studies or does homework. In addition, many Chinese students come to my room when I go outside. If I come back outside, some Chinese students sit on my chair. They sit on my bed without asking me. By the time they say “I’m sorry” I feel really mad and disappointed with my roommate. My classmate, Chad gives some advice. He said, “I think you can tell him to take a shower. If you really smells stink in your room, you can open the window. Also, some Chinese sit on your bed, you can tell them “Don’t sit on my bed or you can sit on your bed all the time.” Thank you for telling me those advices however, I already did your advices, but my roommate couldn’t follow rules. Also, I always opened window when I came back to dorm. About one hour later, my room smells stink again. So, please give your specific examples how to follow them.

DIAO 11/16 *10

Nov 16

Writing 2

DIAO

My classmate Hodong is a very difficult person. He also is my roommate. Everyone said he is a difficult person. For example he always turn on his music very loud that I cannot sleep. He always uses my computer without my permission. He said “I did use your computer” when I ask him “Do not use my computer without asking”. He eats my chips like he owns. The worst one of all, he steals my underwears. He also farts in the room and does not open the window. If I open the window after he farts, he will close it very quickly and says, “Do not open the window I don’t want to open it”. So my room smells bad but he said he like this kind of smell. In my opinion, this is why I think he is a very difficult person.

I am sorry to hear that you can break his music machine by some accident on purpose. You should lock your computer when you do not use it. When he says bad words, you can fight with him. You also can nicely ask him not steal your underwear. If anything doesn’t work, you can talk with RA to change your roommate. You can clean your room many times.

Thank you for your advices to me. I would like to try those, because I cannot stand it. I think those advices can make him know that I am not a bullied guy. I know I will have a bad relationship with him. Some of the advices are not suiting for me, such as fighting with him because I will graduate from this high school this summer. I do not want to cause troubles and get some warnings. Thank you again to give me those advices. By the way, can you give me some other reasonable advices?

ethan chen nov 16

NOV 16
ESL WRITING 2
Ethan Chen

John King

My dorm, John, is a very difficult person in dorm. I and my roommate bought a new PS3. When the John came my room, he always made very noisy in my room. He played the FIFA very exercitd, and I always advised him to quiet. After ten minutes, he couldn't control himself and started to shout again that was very crazy. This was made me very uncomfortable, and even I wanted to throw away the PS3. He always loudly at outside. when he played with others, he always ran and shout others' name, sometimes he also will spitting that was terrible and made me very uncomfortable.
Jia Wen's advise, I am sorry to hear it. There have a some advice I want to give to you.
1. Don't let him come to your room. For example, you can say you are sleeping when he kncok the door.
2. You can go to his room to make noisy too. For example, when he does some thing, make noisy to bother him, let he know the feeling.
3. Don't give PSP to him to play. You can say the PSP have already lent to other people.
4. Have a chat with him. Telling him what feeling you fell.
5. Don't tell him what you have.
6. Tell RA. Let RA talk to him.
7. You go to other people's room to play, let he can't find you.
Thanks for gaving me the advise. I will agree with you the sixth the advise because if I talk to him face to face about he plays games, I will feel very embarrassed . I give him PSP play but I hope he can calm down and charge it. thanks telling me your advise I will tell RA. thanks.

Wang

Nov 16

My dormate Eric Lee is a very difficult person. When he came to my room to found Eric Chang, he always look at me, didn't move his eyes, and his face looked like smile and scared. When I told him do not look at me, he began to laugh. When the second time I told him do not look at me and stop laugh, he looked very scared of me. I don't know what's wrong with him, and when he saw me, he always did like this. Many taiwanese always make him like a slave, but when he do something for taiwanese like a slave, he said do not make me like a slave, and still do something for them again and again when the taiwanese called him like a pet. In my conclusion, he is a so difficult person.

I'll give you some advices. In my opinion, he doesn't want to be slave. For example, he doesn't want to bring a cup of water for other guys. Just give him a break time to take rest. Usual person be normal again when he takes a rest. Even if he doesn't be normal again, you can make him smile again.

Thank you very much. Your advices is good, but I do not agree with you. He looks logy, and his words sounds really stupid many times. For example, when Jamie Lee asked him borrow a bottle of water, he will said" I don't want give you because those water are mine." Many people do not like him, and I do not think he is really normal. Maybe he's crazy, maybe he's too smart that make him very different from other guys. Thank you again, and I will try to look him normal. Maybe it will make me think about him different.

Ho Dong Choi 11/15 *10

Ho Dong Choi
ESL Writing 2
November 15, 2009

Father Fred’s Room

His room is very clean and organized. There are few staffs, such as some markers and pens on his desk. Next to his desk, one computer with a printer is there. In front of the board, there are some chairs, organized, so it looks very good. Additionally most things look bright because of the sunlight, so his room always seems simple and clean. In my opinion, his room is one of the cleanest rooms.

Diao’s advice to me

1. Throw those markers and pens everywhere.
2. Make the desk messy.
3. Bring lot of news paper or magazine to his room.
4. Tear the new papers and tear it.
5. Bring some trash and throw them.
6. Take some oily staff to his room and throw them on the floor.

My response

Thank you for telling me those advices however I don’t want make his room messy. It’s because his room doesn’t belong to me, and it’s for father, whose room need to be holy. In my opinion, if I bring news paper to his room and throw the markers and pens everywhere, he can’t teach students religion. Additionally, he will give me penalty. I never want to make father’s room dirty and never want penalty.

Alex Eun

Alex Eun
11.15.09
ESL writing

Describing a Place

I want to describe my room. First, my room isn’t messy because when I came back dorm, I always opened window and clean my room’s floor. I cleaned mattress and pilow once two weeks. Also, I washed my clothes twice a week. Then, I always clean my desk. I never put my staffs anywhere. Finally, if my trashcan is full, I always empty. My roommate gave some advice how to mess my room. He said “ you can wash your clothes once of two weeks. You don’t throw the trash in trashcan. Finally, you can put all your staffs on the desk. My responsible is disagree. Thank you for telling me those advices. However, pleae give me specific advice. These advices opposite my examples. Also, I can’t do these advices because I have a roommate. If I do these advices, my roommate feel really uncomfortable, and he disappointed to me. So, I hope to give me your examples.

ethan chen nov 15

NOV 15
ESL WRITING 2
Ethan Chen

Mr. Nakagawa's section place

Mr. Nakagawa's section place is kind of messy place because there are many stuffs on his table. For example, there are computer, homework, books and so on. The books are disorganized put together. Mr. Nakagawa also puts his wife photos beside the computer. There are many papers put into the baskets on the table, and some papers leave at different places. He also puts many pen cases on the table and many high lights in it. There is also have a radio on the table. This is the Mr. Nakagawa's section place.
Alex's advices, first, Mr. Nakagawa needs to share sections place. Then, Mr. Nakagawa must put down all stuffs and put sections part such as pens, books . Papers. If Mr. Nakagawa doesn't use stuffs, he just throw it. Also, Mr. Nakagawa needs to empty trasncans. Mr. Nakagawa uses a broom and clean your floor. Finally, if Mr. Nakagawa leave his place, he should put a chair under the table.
Thanks for telling me those advices. I agreed I will tell Mr. Nakagawa to share his section place because I feel Mr. Nakagawa's empty place is so samll. I also agree with you to tell Mr. Nakagawa throw the useless stuffs because so many stuffs on the table to waste much space, and I feel Mr. Will uncomfortable. Thanks for you advice.

DIAO

Nov 15

Writing 2

DIAO

My room is very messy. For example, I put my stuff everywhere, so my room is disorganized. There also are some greasy on the floor, because I ate noodles every night in my room. There are places in my room is neat. First of all is my desk. It is neat, because I need use my computer and study there. Another one place is my bed, I need a comfortable place to sleep,, so it is neat and organized. I put all of my trash in the trash bag, so it is not dirty. I clean my room once a week. When I clean my room, I can take out almost three big full trash bags. In my opinion, my room is very messy.

You can put your stuff on your desk in order.

You can eat noodles without boiling.

You can clean your room whenever it becomes dirty.

You can take your full trash bag whenever it became full.

You can put your clothes in your closet not on the bed.

You can wipe the floor.

Thank you for telling me those advices, however I cannot do this, because I am very lazy. I need more time to study, play computer games or play with other people. The messy room does not matter about my daily life. I just need keep my desk and bed neat. They are only two places I always need. In my opinion, I do not have enough time to do so.

Chad

Chad Gong

15th Nov

My room is kind of messy because I don’t have enough room to out my items. I throw away my T-shirts everywhere. My drawers are really messy. You can see various kinds of items useful or useless inside. Also there’re many daily necessities such as toothbrush, shampoo on the desk get mixed up with stationeries and date wires such as USB wires. Because of electrical equipment, there’re many wires under the desk. I always out my shoes under the desk, so I don’t know where I can put my feet when I use the desk. In addition, I’m too lazy to throw away empty packing cases when I bought something, and there’re 5 packing cases in my room at least. I always want to throw it away next day but when the next day arrived, I didn’t want to throw it away again.

ADAVISES

You should throw away all the trash in you room today and put you daily necessities in you desk. Then put all the books on book selves, move yours shoes on the top of the book selves, buy more dressers for your T-shirts and put them in your closet.

Response

Thanks for your good advices, I like it so much. I’ll do it at this weekend. By the way, could you give me more devises about how to make the room clean and neat? Thanks again.

Wang

Nov 15

Our ESL classroom is a messy room. there are many thing on the table disorganized around the Mr.'s work place. Too many stuff on the table like text book, pens, ink and so on. The location of our tables are also disorganized. There is no picture in the picture window, and there are many newspaper and T-shirt on the picture window. The books in bookshelves looks more better than other things, but there're many useless trash in the back of the bookshelves. The soft chair in our classroom always move. sometimes it move to near the window, and sometimes it move to in front of us because we always play that chair after class. The wall looks very dirty, and there're many old stuff put in the corner, such as old folder, old box and so on. this is our ESL class room.

1. You can make the stuff on the table more orderly, such as put the books together, put the pens in the pencil box, throw some spoiled things away.

2. Put the picture in the picture window, and also you can put the T-shirt and newspaper on the picture.

3. Throw away the trash around the bookshelves.

4. Do not play the soft chair after class.

5. If it is possible, use the paint furbish the wall, and make it more beautiful.

Thank you for telling me those advices, however your 4th idea not gonna work very well in ESL classroom. Your advices give me more idea that let me know how to make our classroom very clean and organized. I will make the classroom better as soon as possible. Thank you very much again.

Jiawen

My room is a clean room, the objects that are in my room is organized. On my desk, I have a box. I put my pen, rule, and pencil in it. There have three drawers with my desk. In the drawers, there have some photos, books, and notebooks. Next to my bed I have a big headset. I put some summer clothes and food on it. The shoes are under the bed. My alarm clock is on my headset. I put all of my uniforms together. They are in a box. The trash can behind my day, everyday after school, I take out my trash. In a word, I am a clean person. I like to make my room clean and everything organized. Because it can makes me easy to find my things by I clean.
Mimi’s advice:
1. Don’t use drawers to put stuff in it and just put your stuff on the desk or floor.
2. Don’t throw your trash and just keep it in your room.
3. Don’t wash your clothes or shoes.
4. Don’t clean your room. For example, don’t wipe your desk and floor.
5. Don’t organize your stuff and put those to any where.
6. Draw pictures on your wall.
To Mimi:
Thanks for your advice to make my room dirty, however I am prefer to make my room keep clean. Because the clean and organized room can make me feel happy and good for me find everything quickly. The clean room also good for my health, I don’t want to my room smell so bad. I hope you can keep your room clean too. It is really good for me.

ethan chen

NOV 12
ESL WRITING 2
Ethan Chen

my room

My room is kind of a dirty room. For example,first,There are three trash cans in my room because I don't want to always go out to through away the trash. Second there are many lines on my desk and around with together so look like chaos. There are many dirty clothes in my basket because I dislike always go down stair to wash my clothes. My shoes all over the floor. Third, Many mineral water bottles beside my mattresses because I always put the bottom on the beside after drinking. So there will be many bottoms beside the mattresses after few days. In my conclusion, I need to clean my room between few days.

Ho Dong

Ho Dong Choi
ESL writing 2
November 12, 2009

Describing Place

There is a house where I have wanted to live in my future. For example, the house has a wide garden, as wide as TMP soccer practice ground, located next to the road, and there are a lot of beautiful flowers and many trees, arranged by a well-trained gardener. The house is a two-story house, made of gray concretes and very sturdy woods, with mirror roofs. In the house, there is wooden floor and the piano, sounding clear. Also, there is a small gym in the house to work out. My bed room consists in the second floor, smelling aromatic. In the room, there is big window, so I can see the moon on the night. Hearing a good classic music, I can fall sleep on the comfortable bed where everyone cannot but sleep. In my opinion, I will be happy even though I have only the house.

DIAO

Nov 12

Writing 2

DIAO

My ESL classroom is in the first floor of TMP high school. Carpet covered the entire floor in this room. I have two classes in this room. There are some small desks in this room. Behind the small desk, there are two long desks in the room we usually use this two table to take some activate. There is a white board in front of the class. We learned many grammar by use this board. Between the board and small desks is teacher’s place. Mr. Nakagawa always teaches us new knowledge in here. In the right corner are some books and our journal which we did last semester. The left corner also belong to Mr. Nakagawa. His computer is over there, he use the computer to check our journal from blog. In my opinion, this is one of my favorites class in the world.

Chad

Chad Gong

12^th Nov

The Student Cafeteria at lunch time

Student Cafeteria is busy at lunch time, and you can hear many different languages at that time even school forbid to speak another language except English. Many students sit together enjoy each other. I wonder why when somebody dropped off the cap on the floor, many students will catcall, maybe they just want to make the lunch time funny. I always enjoy the lunch time in Cafeteria, all the Chinese Speaker will get together. For example, one day, we ate lunch together. Sitting together, Wang and nick always played with each other until no one can eat lunch. We started to talk about some interesting story happened in class long before the lunch, and I always felt so happy when I chart with them. Sometimes, I hope we can eat lunch whole the afternoon, and then go back to dorm.

Alex Eun

Alex Eun
11.12.09
ESL writing

Describing a Place

I want to describe a crowded bus on a hot day. Nowadays, many people use public traffic such as taxi, train, bus, and subway. When I road a bus on summer, a bus was really hot and warm. First, if I get in a bus, I feel so warm. Then, many people seat near by air conditional. Another people were fanning their face. I can see some people drink water every one minute. Even, some people pour the water their face. Also, people started to get mad in the bus because of the hot temperature that surrounded the bus. Finally, a bus has many trashes such as can, tissues, gum, and candy stick. In my conclusion, when you road a bus on summer, you felt really tired and hot.

Wang

Nov 12

The student cafeteria at lunch time

I think the students' cafeteria at lunch time in our school is a very clean place. For example, I have never felt oily in the cafeteria at the lunch time even though we ate something that fried. The floor of the cafeteria in my school in china always made people fell down, and sometimes made our shoes very dirty. In our school, those things not gonna happen because the floor in our cafeteria is very dry and clean. There are Three long tables that we can get the food from the cook. At the lunch time, that place was really crowds because everyone wanted to get food ,and they wanted get more salad. There are many pictures and posters on the wall around the cafeteria, that make the cafeteria very beautiful. Many tables we can choose in cafeteria at the lunch time because there are too many tables. In my conclusion, I think the cafeteria at lunch time in our school is very good.

Jiawen

My dream house
There have a house that I want to live in my future. This house is my dream house. Around this house, there is a big garden, I can water the flower in the garden. In front of the house, there is a swim poor. It is a two floors house. The first floor has living room, kitchen, dining room and a bathroom. I can relax myself on this floor. On the second floor, there is bedroom and a room that for me to put the clothes and change the clothes. Also, there have a big bathroom, I put the big bathtub inside. On the house back there is a big balcony. If I have time, I can drink tea or see the stars at night, so I put the desk and some chairs are made by bamboo. That will be my dream house. Which is a really big house. The house likes my direction that is what I want to live in my future.

DIAO

Nov 11

Writing 2

DIAO

Having study hall, we have to study every day. For example, I have study hall from 8:30 to 10:00. During study hall I have to study. I cannot sleep at study hall; my computer will be taken if I do so. In the study hall I can do my homework. If I have some problem of ESL, I also can ask Mr. Nakagawa. Mr. Nakagawa also can check my journal to make it have fewer mistakes. In my opinion I can study a lot during the study hall.

Alex Eun

Alex Eun
11.11.09
ESL writng

Daily life


I feel my three days was fast. For example, I played game and watched movie when I woke up. In the afternoon, I called my friends, and we promised to meet the school ground. To meet my girl friend, I go to my girlfriend house, and we had a dinner. After we finished a dinner, we went to cinema and watched a movie. Then, we went to go shopping, and we bought couple T-shirt. In my conclusion, when I did all this things, it is time to go really fast.

ethan chen

NOV 11
ESL WRITING 2
Ethan Chen

Game and me

Playing game on the time, I felt very excited.
The game was very interesting, and I played all the time after school.
I played game forgot to eat food.
I played game didn't feel the time.
The computer always very hot because I couldn't stop.
The game had already become a part of my life.

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How much do you like it? What specifically do you do? How fast the time goes?