Ho Dong Choi 11/15 *10

Ho Dong Choi
ESL Writing 2
November 15, 2009

Father Fred’s Room

His room is very clean and organized. There are few staffs, such as some markers and pens on his desk. Next to his desk, one computer with a printer is there. In front of the board, there are some chairs, organized, so it looks very good. Additionally most things look bright because of the sunlight, so his room always seems simple and clean. In my opinion, his room is one of the cleanest rooms.

Diao’s advice to me

1. Throw those markers and pens everywhere.
2. Make the desk messy.
3. Bring lot of news paper or magazine to his room.
4. Tear the new papers and tear it.
5. Bring some trash and throw them.
6. Take some oily staff to his room and throw them on the floor.

My response

Thank you for telling me those advices however I don’t want make his room messy. It’s because his room doesn’t belong to me, and it’s for father, whose room need to be holy. In my opinion, if I bring news paper to his room and throw the markers and pens everywhere, he can’t teach students religion. Additionally, he will give me penalty. I never want to make father’s room dirty and never want penalty.