ethan chen nov 15

NOV 15
ESL WRITING 2
Ethan Chen

Mr. Nakagawa's section place

Mr. Nakagawa's section place is kind of messy place because there are many stuffs on his table. For example, there are computer, homework, books and so on. The books are disorganized put together. Mr. Nakagawa also puts his wife photos beside the computer. There are many papers put into the baskets on the table, and some papers leave at different places. He also puts many pen cases on the table and many high lights in it. There is also have a radio on the table. This is the Mr. Nakagawa's section place.
Alex's advices, first, Mr. Nakagawa needs to share sections place. Then, Mr. Nakagawa must put down all stuffs and put sections part such as pens, books . Papers. If Mr. Nakagawa doesn't use stuffs, he just throw it. Also, Mr. Nakagawa needs to empty trasncans. Mr. Nakagawa uses a broom and clean your floor. Finally, if Mr. Nakagawa leave his place, he should put a chair under the table.
Thanks for telling me those advices. I agreed I will tell Mr. Nakagawa to share his section place because I feel Mr. Nakagawa's empty place is so samll. I also agree with you to tell Mr. Nakagawa throw the useless stuffs because so many stuffs on the table to waste much space, and I feel Mr. Will uncomfortable. Thanks for you advice.