Sunday, November 15, 2009

Jiawen

My room is a clean room, the objects that are in my room is organized. On my desk, I have a box. I put my pen, rule, and pencil in it. There have three drawers with my desk. In the drawers, there have some photos, books, and notebooks. Next to my bed I have a big headset. I put some summer clothes and food on it. The shoes are under the bed. My alarm clock is on my headset. I put all of my uniforms together. They are in a box. The trash can behind my day, everyday after school, I take out my trash. In a word, I am a clean person. I like to make my room clean and everything organized. Because it can makes me easy to find my things by I clean.
Mimi’s advice:
1. Don’t use drawers to put stuff in it and just put your stuff on the desk or floor.
2. Don’t throw your trash and just keep it in your room.
3. Don’t wash your clothes or shoes.
4. Don’t clean your room. For example, don’t wipe your desk and floor.
5. Don’t organize your stuff and put those to any where.
6. Draw pictures on your wall.
To Mimi:
Thanks for your advice to make my room dirty, however I am prefer to make my room keep clean. Because the clean and organized room can make me feel happy and good for me find everything quickly. The clean room also good for my health, I don’t want to my room smell so bad. I hope you can keep your room clean too. It is really good for me.

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