Alex Eun
11.17.09
ESL writing
11.17.09
ESL writing
Section in ESL class
I will describe Mr.Nakagawa’s work place. First, Mr.Nakagawa’s desk is really messy. He has many English grammar books and papers. He has his pictures of his wife from when he lived in Japan, and pictures beside his computer. Also, there are many textbooks put into the baskets on the desk. He puts a lot of pens, highlighters, and markers in coffee cups. He hangs Mimi’s blue and white frame and afro-hair. Finally, he has an orange and gray radio. I want to give advice on how to clean his desk. First, you need to organize items by type, to do this start by putting everything on the ground. Then, start putting groups of things back onto sections of the desk. In my conclusion, Mr.Nakagawa’s desk is really messy, I think he needs to follow my advice.
I will describe Mr.Nakagawa’s work place. First, Mr.Nakagawa’s desk is really messy. He has many English grammar books and papers. He has his pictures of his wife from when he lived in Japan, and pictures beside his computer. Also, there are many textbooks put into the baskets on the desk. He puts a lot of pens, highlighters, and markers in coffee cups. He hangs Mimi’s blue and white frame and afro-hair. Finally, he has an orange and gray radio. I want to give advice on how to clean his desk. First, you need to organize items by type, to do this start by putting everything on the ground. Then, start putting groups of things back onto sections of the desk. In my conclusion, Mr.Nakagawa’s desk is really messy, I think he needs to follow my advice.
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