Alex Eun

Alex Eun

11.16.09

ESL writing

Describing a Place

My roommate, Lucas is a very difficult person, in the dorm. My roommate doesn’t take a shower everyday. He just washes his face and brushes his teeth before he went to school. I think he only took a shower on weekend. Also, my room smells bad because of him. So, I often buy incesents because when some Korean students come to my room, they leave early. In addition, he is always playing games or watching cartoons. I never see that he studies or does homework. In addition, many Chinese students come to my room when I go outside. If I come back outside, some Chinese students sit on my chair. They sit on my bed without asking me. By the time they say “I’m sorry” I feel really mad and disappointed with my roommate. My classmate, Chad gives some advice. He said, “I think you can tell him to take a shower. If you really smells stink in your room, you can open the window. Also, some Chinese sit on your bed, you can tell them “Don’t sit on my bed or you can sit on your bed all the time.” Thank you for telling me those advices however, I already did your advices, but my roommate couldn’t follow rules. Also, I always opened window when I came back to dorm. About one hour later, my room smells stink again. So, please give your specific examples how to follow them.